User blog comment:Azelfland/Asphalt stories season 9 preview/@comment-36446222-20180901124921

I have some improvement suggestions for your blog posts here. I respect the amount of work needed to create this/these blog posts.

1/ Try to not cuss/say bad words You could clearly see that there are some cussing involved here. Any of the "beach", "dang it", at least in my opinion, makes your story a little bit worse. Try to censor them with an asterisk (*) or warn that only teenagers are allowed.

2/ Capitalize I know it doesn't not take too much time to capitalize some words so that sentences read are more interesting, at least IMO.

3/ Text format This is a little bit difficult to do here. I am really skilled (is it the right word?) at Microsoft Word, and to create something at is "good", try to format some words and really make the whole story easier to read.

Thanks, and share your opinion.

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