Thread:Aris Cheese God/@comment-27155800-20171114173131

Hello, Axis, your cheesy champ wants to give you some advise! Hope you don't mind.

First off, write a script if you have time. That should help to prevent awkward moments where you make mistakes or say contradictory things in the same video (like how the Evora is good and bad at MP).

Secondly, use a bit a fact along the way, that makes you sound more convincing. Exclaiming "This car SUUUCCCKS!!!" will make it sound like as if you're just trying to express your displeasure with that car, add something like "even at MAX+PRO with an elite tuning of 0808 it's still nearly 10 mph lower than most other cars with similar ranks." Also this can help avoid mistakes like claiming "the GTC4 Lusso has good drifting" (I don't have that car but I know it's drifting radius is 31, which is better than the FF's 33 but still wider than the Aventador SV's 29 which you correctly claim is bad).

Anyway, these are just mine personal opinions and you can disregard them if you like. I wish you luck in both your YouTube career and your studies! 